Warrior Princess

Okay. This was good. Emotionally painful but yet very enjoyable. I must say the subject's a bit cliche, you know, the whole emo-girl-whom-no-one-understands thing, but you presented it well.

Wow. This was beautiful and disturbing at the same time, rather like Edgar Allan Poe. *wink* Also, it was evocative, so I can't really critique you much. :)

This is a pretty powerful poem. I can relate to the situation described; revenge is a great feeling, but then you just can't bring yourself to do it. I can't ...

I guess if you're terrible at keeping secrets, it's best to just go ahead and say so, eh? Haha. I liked this, as I liked its sequel. It's a little ...

I liked this; it was angry without being over-the-top. You have some capitalization issues and line breaks in weird places, but maybe you intended it that way? "Insisted that we ...

First of all, LOSE THE EXCLAMATION POINTS. They are cheesy. The poem could use some spicing up, it's a bit cliche as it is. Try expressing the feeling in a ...

This is very beautiful and colorful, presenting a wonderful array of imagery. I can't really find anything to nitpick. I liked this line: "Lightning flashes, scarring the sky" A very ...

First of all, I like how you don't specify what country the man and woman are from. It makes the poem relatable to all ethnicities. I also like how you ...

Aw! This poem is so sweet! I love how you describe the setting and the little girl. These lines were my favorites: "you could still see her frozen cheeks, where ...

This was simply beautiful. The imagery is both vague and evocative, presenting a translucent mirage of blue and white. I'm still a little hazy on what it's actually about, but ...

It's hard to realy review a haiku, since they are SO unbearably short. I didn't quite get it, but then there wasn't much to get. I think you did do ...

I didn't exactly understand how the three stanzas connect to each other; but maybe that's one of those "you'd have to know about it" scenarios. I thought the poem was ...

This poem was definitely amusing. Actually, at the beginning I thought it was going to be serious and poetic, like most of my poems about the ocean; but then it ...

Whoa...this is one heck of a poem...or should I say three? I must admit I had no idea what in the world you were talking about half the time, but ...

This was good. Not great, perhaps, but good. I think it feels a little rushed; I would take a little more time to illustrate the emotions of both characters. But ...